I think that you did a great job with this assignment and your elevator pitch is unique and strong. I think that your pitch on a software that can fact check articles and other information from the internet is an opportunity that can affect many people in a positive way. I think that you did a very nice job presenting your idea by using passion and knowledge to get your goal to the audience.
You have presented an intriguing opportunity, in that it can be rather difficult finding reliable information through various media sources. With the amount of information media outlets provide for the public community, it can be tough gauging different sources' credibility when compared to similar stories. I believe you did an excellent job presenting your opportunity as well as providing a feasible solution within your elevator pitch. Nicely done!
You nailed the outlining of your problem and how relevant it is today. You also transitioned well into describing the service you wish to provide and how you'd go about doing so. Additionally, you appeared very comfortable and delivered the message well. Of all the elevator pitches I watched, this one definitely comes the closest to the examples our professor provided us. Great job.
I found your elevator pitch very interesting and relevant. As all of us, you for sure need to keep practicing, but overall I think you already are a step ahead in this game. I really liked the way you transitioned to the service description and enjoyed listening to your elevator pitch overall. I believe you projected credibility and followed the example set by the professor properly. Keep using it confidently as it will help you with employers, superiors and any situation that calls for it
Your opportunity is very relevant to today's society, as I consistently see "fake news" on all kinds of social media. I think that a software that would filter "fake news" is something that many people would want, and would help more people to not be misinformed about current topics. Your communicative skills in your presentation were very good, and you had a flow and demeanor that was very natural and progressive. Hope to hear more!
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ReplyDeleteI think that you did a great job with this assignment and your elevator pitch is unique and strong. I think that your pitch on a software that can fact check articles and other information from the internet is an opportunity that can affect many people in a positive way. I think that you did a very nice job presenting your idea by using passion and knowledge to get your goal to the audience.
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ReplyDeleteYou have presented an intriguing opportunity, in that it can be rather difficult finding reliable information through various media sources. With the amount of information media outlets provide for the public community, it can be tough gauging different sources' credibility when compared to similar stories. I believe you did an excellent job presenting your opportunity as well as providing a feasible solution within your elevator pitch. Nicely done!
Adrian,
ReplyDeleteYou nailed the outlining of your problem and how relevant it is today. You also transitioned well into describing the service you wish to provide and how you'd go about doing so. Additionally, you appeared very comfortable and delivered the message well. Of all the elevator pitches I watched, this one definitely comes the closest to the examples our professor provided us. Great job.
Adrian,
ReplyDeleteI found your elevator pitch very interesting and relevant. As all of us, you for sure need to keep practicing, but overall I think you already are a step ahead in this game. I really liked the way you transitioned to the service description and enjoyed listening to your elevator pitch overall. I believe you projected credibility and followed the example set by the professor properly. Keep using it confidently as it will help you with employers, superiors and any situation that calls for it
Your opportunity is very relevant to today's society, as I consistently see "fake news" on all kinds of social media. I think that a software that would filter "fake news" is something that many people would want, and would help more people to not be misinformed about current topics. Your communicative skills in your presentation were very good, and you had a flow and demeanor that was very natural and progressive. Hope to hear more!
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